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I think i told my story well. i think the reader got a good idea as to why i dont have good reading habits.

i think i explain how summer reading played a big role as to why reading became such a turn off.

i think a lot in my writing could still be improved. i need to write a little more clearly and use more detail in explaining things.

i just down down and thought about why i didnt like to read and what events in the past that may have caused this.

I made a list of ideas.

They said some parts were confusing so i re-wrote those parts to make it more clear.

I need to write clearer and have more detail.